Friday 2 October

Hiya folks!!!! ... Time again for another update.... We've just come back from the Blackpool Contress and what a fabulous time we had, despite it being Blackpool!! As has been said before, it's not the place that matters, but the people... It was a real joy to meet some lovely people, some we've met before, others who have merely been names on the screen, particularly our friends from Canada. The last few days have been and the next few will continue to be days of hosting our guests and should provide us all with some lovely memories. A big special mention of our dear friends Kathleen McBride (Perfidia on IRC), Brian Marvin (Uncle Betty), Gill Kasella (RBaz), Greg Wadden (Greggy) and Sheila Mackay (Sunbuny), not forgetting new friends Sheila Richmond, Darlene Wakely and Joan McClement - it's been a real pleasure meeting you all. I'll do a fuller report next week as we are running short on time and I want to get this Update out of the way, but couldn't let the weekend pass without mention.

Talking of hosting, I hope our son learns some skills, based on events over the weekend. On Saturday night, he and one of his friends, Ian, went for a night out on the tiles, in Glossop. On their way back home, Ian decided he wanted more of the action, so he turned around and went back into town. The agreement, apparently, was that Simon would put up Ian for the night. Anyway, Simon comes home, locks up, head hits the pillow and goes straight off into land of nod. He comes to with a start at 7 a.m. and suddenly remembers the previous night's agreement with Ian. He rushes downstairs to find Ian, huddled up freezing, in the porch, where he had been since 3 a.m. Despite him banging on the door and ringing the doorbell (and our doorbell is VERY loud), that had failed to rouse Simon, who blissfully slept through it all. Some host!!!

Anyway... without further ado, it's time for the update, sponsored by Cadbury's Marble

The episode commences with Kevin and Rita meeting up in the Street. He tells Rita that, despite the message in Sally's phone call saying he was hitting her, that had not occurred - he hadn't touched her. Rita tells him she knows this, but recognises he was probably not far off doing so, due to provocation. He couldn't hit her, he tells Rita. Meanwhile, Rita is telling him how she had told Sally that the way she was carrying on, she would have no friends left and how Sally tried her patience so she can imagine how Kevin must be feeling. At that stage, Sally walks by the two of them and tells Rita that whatever Kevin is telling her, she should take it with a bag of salt. Rita angrily replies to her "do you think I'm not capable of making up my own mind? Give us some credit. Anyway, I've told you what I think. I hope you slept on it." After Sally has gone, she tells Kevin that she hopes that she comes to her senses soon, because she is playing a dangerous game. "That's what I keep telling her" replies Kevin and he thanks Rita for seeing it from his side. Rita replies that she is not interested in taking sides, she just wants what is best for the little girls, because they are too young to stick up for themselves.

Outside Freshco, Spider has been waiting for Anne Malone. When he sees her getting out of her car, he introduces himself. He is Norman Watts' cousin - Curly has gone missing and he is trying to find him, he tells her. "Yes, you and the Police" she replies, "how do I know you are his cousin?" She wonders whether he might actually be a policeman. When Spider denies this and finds it amusing that he could look like one, she points out that the whole point of being a plain-clothes policeman, is that he looks anything but. "Yeah, as I know to my cost", he laughs, "but that's another story." He insists he is Curly's cousin and tells her that Curly told him the whole story in confidence as to how he was set up and that he knows a lot more about her than she might imagine - he asks to speak to her in private and she suggests that they continue the discussion in her office.

At Roy's flat, he and Hayley are doing the washing up. She is telling him that it would be nice for them to have a long weekend away somewhere, a nice hotel. "I'd like that" replies Roy. "Somewhere very luxurious, the Dales or the Lakes," she continues. "Or we could take tents" replies our romantic hero. "It would be a bit chilly this time of year, Roy" she tells him, "anyway, it's my treat, so don't go out buying ground sheets and billy cans. What do you say?" Roy is keen on the idea and says he will see whether Gail can manage without him. "Right and I'll ask Mr Baldwin. I'm due some time off" she replies. "In that case you won't have to ask him, will you?" replies Roy. When Hayley tells him that its just a matter of checking it is convenient, Roy continues on his track - such an issue doesn't come into it, he maintains, merely that he refuses to be beholden to Mike Baldwin and he'd be happier if she just informed him. "Right, I will" replies RHayley, "not worth falling out over." She kisses him on the cheek and departs.

We move to the Mallets' house. Judeh asks Gareh how long he has been fishing - she has found all sorts of fishing gear under the bed, "tins, reels, all sorts of stuff." Gareh asks her, in a concerned voice, whether she has opened any of the tins. When she replies to the contrary, he is relieved, but clearly has a guilty secret, "best not, just in case." When she asks him to sort them out, he tells her that he cannot do it now, as he has to practice on his drums. And with that, we see one exasperated Judeh as our budding Gene Krupa bashes his way into overdrive.

Spider is talking to Anne Malone - he is telling her that it couldn't have been Curly responsible for the extortion letters, going missing is out of character for him. When Anne asks who else it could have been, Spider tells her that it was someone very clever, someone with a grudge against him. Anne asks who it could be and Spider tells her that Curly doesn't know. However, he has a feeling that if Curly is going to contact anyone, then it's going to be her - he then starts spinning her a yarn about how what Curly had told him about her, what he thought of her, how he felt about her coming back to work with him. "Never in her wildest dreams will Anne know what she really means to me" is the quote he attributes to Curly. It is clear that this statement has taken Anne aback. Spider continues "but I guess, after what happened with Raquel and every other woman he's been involved with, his self-confidence was non-existent, so he kept it to himself. Self-protection. He was terrified that you would knock him back, so he never unburdened himself to you. I understand that he led you to believe that he didn't like you. Nothing could have been further from the truth." A devastated and astonished Anne replies "if only he had said. Then none of this need have happened." Spider tells her that he is determined to prove Curly's innocence, because he reckons that's the only thing that will bring him out of hiding. He asks Anne to remember, that should Curly contact her, despite what he might say, he is crazy about her and if she can think of anything that can help clear his name, then she is to call him. He hands her a piece of paper on which he has just written his contact information.

Vera is cheesed off with Jack's attitude to their holidays - anyone else she knows would jump at the chance of a holiday in Tenerife, she tells him. In that case, they are welcome to his ticket, is Jack's reply. She tells him that surely he doesn't mean it, after all, look at the fun they had last year in Las Vegas. They are going to the Canaries with the sun, sea, and sand, she tells him. "And lager louts" he adds. "No, summat else beginning with S" she continues. "Stomach ache" is Jack's classic retort. When she asks, in that case, where he would like to go, after a brief pause "Newmarket" is his answer - that's our Jack, a perfect life being race meetings and gambling. When she says that she wouldn't like to go there, his reply is "who mentioned owt about you going?" Vera loses her temper and tells him that he is going on holiday whether he likes it or not and he is going to enjoy himself, "so get packing."

At the café, Roy is telling Gail that he has a lot for which to be grateful - if it wasn't for her, then he would still be dragging his feet. He has never been one for taking the bull by the horns. She disputes this statement, he surprised her when he leapt in and bought the café, "quite the man of action". He agrees that he can be impulsive, but he is talking about affairs of the heart. "Is this leading somewhere?" she asks. "Yes, the Dales or the Lakes," he replies, "we'd like to take a long weekend" and he asks whether this would be alright by her. "I'm sure I'll manage somehow" is her reply.

She goes over to Sally who is also sitting in the café and comments that Roy hasn't come down to earth yet. Sally asks whether she has seen Rita today. When Gail replies to the contrary, Sally goes into a slagging off session - she doesn't know what has got into her recently, "she has suddenly started to tell me how to run my life, as if she is any example. She practically told me that I was selfish. She behaves as though I am not fit to look after my own children." When Gail tries to calm her by saying that maybe Rita is over-reacting, Sally replies "never mind maybe. If she had her way, they'd be living with Kevin." Gail points out that she might behave differently once she has got to know Greg a bit better. Gail asks how Greg feels about the girls moving into the flat. "Oh, he's fine" replies Sally, "he's away at the moment, he's on business." When Gail asks what he thinks about living with a ready-made family, Sally confesses that she hasn't told him yet.

... and the theme tune comes in, on cue for the end of part 1

After the ads, it's Part 2
The second part of the programme commences back at the café. Gail is asking Sally whether she is worried that Greg won't be suited to child-rearing. Sally denies this, she just hasn't had the chance to tell him yet, that's all. She tells Gail that she has only had a chance to talk business when they have talked on the phone. Gail says that she is all for Sally showing an interest in his work, but isn't this taking things to extremes - Sally then confesses that they have gone into business together.

Back at the Mallets, Gareh has been practising on his drums. He apologises for disturbing Judeh and tells her to put her feet up. She, however, has cleaning to do. He doesn't want her overdoing things "you'll be polishing the cobbles next." He recommends that she takes a break, which will be impossible while she is at home, so he suggests her going away, maybe to stay with her best mate, Jenny, whom she has not seen for years, while she has a choice.

Sally is telling Gail about her business plans for her joint venture with Greg, how they need an office and a warehouse facility. They can buy in top quality underwear without making it themselves, so it's a matter of finding a buyer and selling it on. When Gail asks how come it is so cheap, Sally replies that they don't have the same overheads in Romania. And the strength of the pound helps. Gail asks whether this is Sally's idea or Greg's, Sally replies it is Greg's contacts. ".... And your money" adds Gail. Sally maintains it was her idea to invest in the business, Greg never asked for a penny, "he wouldn't - he's not that kind of person. He's very kind and I love him." "I can see that, Sal, I'm just being over-cautious on your behalf" replies Gail. She adds that being in business she knows how easy it is to make mistakes, over-expand. Sally pooh-poohs this, saying it's a different situation, on a much bigger scale, to which Gail replies that this is good reason to be cautious. Sally tells her that Mike Baldwin is unaware of the position and Gail confirms she will keep quiet about her secret.

Hayley has just popped into the café to tell her that she has successfully sorted out her holiday break with Mike Baldwin, "he were very amenable." Roy replies that's because she is a good worker and not because Baldwin has an ounce of decency in the man. "Anyway, subject closed" she says, but Roy replies "if only it could be." When Hayley suggests that they ignore Mike, Roy expresses his concerns that Baldwin knows far too much about them for his liking. "About me, there's nothing odd about you, Roy" replies Hayley. At this stage our hero says "nor you, Hayley, and don't let anyone tell you that there is..." (Oooh, sniffle, what a hero!!!!) When Hayley accuses of him being too loyal, Roy replies "I'm talking about being true to oneself, instead of all this hiding away and convincing oneself that one is inferior" to which Hayley comes out with the classic line "one is talking a bit like Prince Charles, isn't one"!!!!! Roy tells her that he doesn't see it as a joke - they have to stick up for themselves, nobody else will.

Natalie is telling Des that it's years since she went to Hartlepool. Des says she wouldn't recognise it, Marina, brand new historic quay, "you can even watch the football under cover if you're a masochist." He asks whether she is kitted out for the wedding, which she confirms. He tells her that they are staying overnight at the same hotel where the reception is being held, so there will be no hassle regarding driving. Natalie tells him that there is a bit of trouble about her being allowed time off by Alec. When he advises her to tell Alec to take a running jump, Natalie expresses her fear of the risk of losing her job. Des confirms how important it is to him for her to accompany him to the wedding.

At the Rovers, Judeh is about to go off for her short break. Gareh is full of the possibilities of him having a recording contract in his pocket when she gets home. She wishes him well and they leave the pub together, with her about to take the train.

The taxi has arrived to take Jack and Vera off for their holiday flight. Jack is wistfully reciting his ideal holiday "sat at home, reading a card from our Vera with a picture of a kangaroo on it"!!!!! Vera is fully of excitement at the imminent holiday. Alec is stirring it, in best Gilroy manner "go on Jack, you'll have a wonderful time." We see the priceless picture of a reluctant Jack leaving the pub to go on his holiday with Vera.

After they have departed, Natalie comes in and asks to have word with Alec. He tells her that he has been expecting this - he had heard from a third party that she was going to be letting him down. She is going to a wedding, she says, she told Vera but he wasn't around at the time. She asks whether it is a problem, but Alec is playing awkward, telling her that it is certainly inconvenient. She suggests that, in that case, she should have a chat with Lorraine and persuade her to change her shift. Recognising that he cannot hold out forever, he tells her that she could work a couple of hours now "if you wanted to stay in my good books." Realising that it isn't worth making an issue of it, Natalie says that she will have to tell Des, as they were supposed to be going out. Alec smirks as she goes out, having retrieved a point in this game of one-upmanship.

At the pub, Spider is reporting back to Alma - he confirms that Anne Malone is mad for Curly. He tells Alma about his conversation with Anne and her reaction "if only you'd told me sooner, none of this need have happened." He asks Alma what she makes of that. But Alma recommends caution "she's a lot cleverer than you realise." When Spider repeats Anne's promise to call if she could think of any way to clear Curly's name, Alma suggests that he doesn't hold his breath waiting for the call, she is hardly likely to admit to being the one who sent the letters.

A tearful Anne is looking at a photograph of Curly "don't worry, I'll think of something" says Evil Eyes. She lovingly kisses the photograph.... what a basket case!!!

Gail has come into the Kabin for a word with Rita. She is concerned about her conversation with Sally. Rita confirms she has given Sally a piece of her mind and tells Gail that if she is here to persuade her "to put things straight, you're wasting your time." Gail confirms she is as worried as Rita, probably more. Rita expresses her concern about the hold that Greg has over Sally, which Gail attributes to love, whereupon Rita opines that, in that case, "I think its one-sided." Gail discloses her fears that Greg is after Sally for her money.

Natalie has popped back home to change out of her smarts into her working clothes. Des is not pleased at her having to forego a night out. However, her news that she has sorted out the weekend, pleases Des. He tells her that it is ages since he saw the old clan, she wont be able to get a word in edgeways. Natalie is clearly concerned about the prospect of meeting Des' family for the first time and asks whether there is anyone she needs to wary about. He tells her not to worry, she should just be herself. Nat asks how Des plans on introducing her. after some debate he suggests "partner" being the appropriate designation. When Natalie points out that they don't actually live together, Des replies that there is no reason why they shouldn't - he has been meaning to mention the idea, "what do you say, me and you? Proper couple..."

At the Rovers, Maude is asking Hayley whether living together is all they expected. "We're both very happy, aren't we, Roy?" is Hayley's reply. "Now we've taken the plunge, should have done it months ago" adds Roy.

Spider and Alma are still discussing Anne Malone and how her previous dismissal from Firman's was hushed up. Alma suggests that if they could get the witnesses to come forward and give a statement, it is possible they could blow her credibility. Alma recounts how Anne had put something into Samantha's bag and accused her of shoplifting and how a girl called Shula, who used to work there. They decide to try to track her down.

Back at the bar, Roy is getting the drinks in. Mike Baldwin barges in, ordering his drink. When Roy points out politely that he was in the queue first, "Is that so? You'll have to shout louder next time, won't you?" is Mike's dismissive reply. In the background, we can see Hayley being agitated at Roy rising to the bait. Mike gets served and Roy puts his order.

Mike goes into loud-mouth mode "I hear you and your friend are going on holiday soon. Where are you going? Thailand?"

"Why do you say that?" replies a nervous looking Roy.

MVB: "Well, I thought you and your, er, partner would go for the exotic."

RC: "I'm not with you."

MVB: "Well, be just up your street there....I mean, anything goes, genderwise...."

RC: "I beg your pardon"

MVB: "Weirdoes, freaks!"

RC: "I resent that."

MVB: "Look, if she's not a freak, I'm the Queen Mother, alright?"

RC: "I think you'd better withdraw that remark."

MVB: "Why? What's the matter? Can't you take a joke?"

RC: "I mean it. I want an apology."

MVB: "Well, you'll just have to carry on wanting, won't you?"

RC: "I'll have to ask you to step outside."

MVB (laughing): "You what? Have you heard what this lunatic's just said to me, eh?"

Alec Gilroy: "What's going on?"

RC: "Come on! Outside!"

AG: "Look! I don't want any trouble."

MVB "Look! All I said was.... do you wanna tell him, or do you want me to?" (said to Roy)

AG: "Tell me what?"

At this, Roy picks up the drink which has been served to him and throws it at Mike's face (Cheers all round from the Contress crowd at the Royal Glen at Blackpool. Nay! Most probably, cheers all round the country!!!!!)

MVB (wet through, angrily): "Right, sunshine!!!" (Alma tries to restrain Mike.) "That wasn't clever. Not very clever at all."

Cut to Spider, who, having seen the events, raises a thumbs up sign to Roy...

.....and with that.... it is the cue for music and credits

Episode written by Phil Woods

All material is, and remains, copyright property of Granada Television.

Well, how was it for me? A bit of a mixed bag. Saving grace has to be that neither Greg nor Plank were in the episode. As far as Anne Malone is concerned, as I the only one to find her acting unconvincing? Much ado nothing with the Mallets.

So what does that leave? Ah, Roy and Hayley!!! Well, they made the episode. The best bits of dialogue - him suggesting camping, the "Prince Charles" quip and, of course, doing what we would all like to do, throwing a drink at Mike Baldwin after his taunting. We saw this with the rest of the troops at Blackpool and you could have heard our cheers miles away, as the beer hit MVB's face. Mind you, I *AM* having problems trying to persuade "her downstairs" not to follow through with the death threats towards Baldwin!!!! Hehehehehe!!

Anyway that's it for now.. Until the next time, take care...

Hugs and kisses from Tinky^, Regards - Alan


Sunday 4 October

This week, I have been mostly browsing... Graham Allsopp's Who's Who site. Curious to see what past updaters wrote, I spent many an hour randomly selecting updates from the last 3 years or so. What excellent stuff. I was struck most by how much the updates have grown in the last year or so. It appears that Dewey and latterly Alan have been responsible for the ever- expanding girth of the average update. (With an honourable mention to Nigel Worsfold, whose other-worldly babblings must surely have found him a place in a mental institution. Or Microsoft.) And in a long, roundabout, fashion this is my way of getting around to saying that I am going to have to rein in my Sunday updates slightly, to about a perfect 8. It has been somewhat of a strain recently trying to find 2 hours or so to write each one up, and with a real risk of me losing my office Internet connection, I may be forced to (takes deep breath) pay for my own dial-up. If that happens, then I simply won't have the time to spend either, especially if we can't get the computers shifted out of Number 1 son's bedroom. I'll be vying for time with the latest shoot-em-up...

So, with nothing more exciting than that to lead in with (I wasn't at the Blackpool Contress), let's move on to the latest Sunday episode of our favourite soap.

Act 1
We open in Roy's love-nest, where he and Hayley are having breakfast and talking about Mike Baldwin's impromptu baptism the night before. Roy rues the waste of half a pint of Newton and Ridley's, and thinks it might have been a mistake all round. He is concerned about the effect on Hayley, as she works at Mike's factory, and wonders if she shouldn't give up her job and help him at the cafe instead. After all, they don't really need the money as such. Hayley tells him she likes working at the factory with the rest of the girls, and it's something she'll just have to deal with. Maybe she'll have a quiet word with Mike before the rest arrive, and try to smooth things out. Appeal to his better nature. With perfect timing, Roy pauses, and asks "does he have one ?".

Over at Gary's house, our ears are assaulted by his attempt at drumming along to "Smoke on the Water", and a persistent hammering on his front door. He opens the door to find Jim, somewhat less than pleased to be listening to this racket through the dividing wall at eight o'clock. [Don't worry if you don't have a mental picture of the Street - neither have I.] Gary apologises and explains that as Judy is away at a friend's house, he has been waking early and it seemed like mid-morning to him. Jim suggests he might want to sell the drum-kit, what with the baby on its way, but Gary surprises him by saying he has an audition with a local band that afternoon. [Gary mate, my twenty quid soundcard plays better drums than you...]

Hayley finds Mike in his office, reading a paper. He turns round and tells her he knew who it was, as she was wearing far too much perfume. "Not like real women", he says. He's surprised she showed her face that day. Hayley tells him she likes working there, but she'd like a word with him. "What, man to man you mean ?", is Mike's riposte. She starts to tell him that what she has done wasn't easy. The words are barely out before Mike chips in with "what, having your wedding tackle cut off ?". No, that was the easiest part, she says, she means working with the rest of the women and trying to fit in and be accepted. She can handle Mike's comments, but she doesn't think Roy can, and asks Mike to keep the truth to himself. Just then, Janice and some of the other workers arrive, and Janice sticks her head in the door to offer her congratulations to Roy for doing what they'd all wanted to do themselves. After she goes, Mike tells Hayley that he'll try to be discreet, but can't promise what might slip out, in the heat of the moment. [Ooh, that didn't come out quite right !]

Les is collecting Toyah, freshly returned from her holiday. He tells her she looks great, and thinks there might be a twinkle in her eye. Excited, she tells him about this great bunch of girls she was with, one of them could drink a whole bottle of vodka, and then they were mooning at some lads [and this is not what Les wants to hear, really] and that's how she met... HIM. Someone by the name of "Dobber". [I had to stifle a laugh at this, in front of the kids. Where I grew up, this was a term of abuse, and was pretty much what you would call some bloke if you thought he was a "dick", which was what it was taken to mean.] Les hopes she didn't do anything she shouldn't have. "You what ?!", says Toyah. It weren't like that, apparently, cos they fell in love. The real thing. It might have been best if Les could have rolled his eyes right back in their sockets at this point, but we had to content ourselves with his hopeful observation that Dobber probably lived miles away. In another country, with a bit of luck. But his luck's out, as Toyah tells that he practically lives round the corner. She went to his school, even. And he'll be round to see her straight away.

Natalie and Lorraine are idly chatting behind the bar about the weekend with Des' family. It doesn't seem to have gone as well as Natalie might have hoped, Des said nothing to her or his family about having asked her to move in with him.

Janice and Liz and Hayley arrive for lunch. Liz is fishing for snippets of gossip about exactly what Mike said to Roy that prompted his early bath. Just then, Mike arrives, and Janice suggests a replay for her benefit. Mike says he'll buy them all a drink, "to shut them up", and adds he'll buy one for Hayley too, "as well as the ladies". He doesn't bear a grudge, see. [Just a mile-wide cruel streak.]

As Les and Toyah arrive back home in a taxi, a nasty-looking specimen of modern yoof is seen hanging about. We don't need a sign-post to know that this is Dobber. He and Toyah snog enthusiastically. She introduces him to Les, who shrugs a brief "hello". Dobber responds with an overly chummy "how are you Les, y'alright ?", which if I had been Les would probably have incited me to stick a fist down his throat and remove his lungs the hard way. Thirteen million viewers cool to Dobber in the space of about 15 seconds.

Alma is furtively shuffling through files in Curly's office. She seems to have found something interesting, but is interrupted by Anne Malone, and just about manages to excuse herself by asking where the till rolls might be kept. In the drawer below, it fortunately turns out. We then see some rather odd goings-on as Anne hands Alma [a humble floor worker] some report to look at, then retracts them with a "wrong ones" comment, and then produces another set of figures, showing store growth and expansion plans. Alma is as bemused as the rest of us, as to what this means. It seems to satisfy the mad Anne, though.

Intermission
How dare they ? In the middle of Corrie, we find Dirty Den in the bath, humouring us with "life after soap" and "cleaning up my act" quips. Spooky. Oh, and some *dreadful* life assurance ads from Pearl, along the lines of "I hope you've made proper provision for the kids, you might die or be horribly maimed tomorrow". Sort of thing that almost makes you want to plan to die penniless, just to keep commission out of the hands of this lot.

Act 2
Gary has arrived at the "audition" - three young lads with two guitars and a keyboard in a garage. It goes really badly, as they all discover that not only does Gary have no musical knowledge whatsoever, but his drumming skills are on a par with the average "two pencils on the edge of the desk" office worker. Don't give up your day job, Gary.

Alma and Spider discuss her unsuccessful attempt to get hold of the address of the Bettabuys [or was it Firmans ?] employee who knew the truth about Anne's attempt to get Curly sacked for sexual harassment. They might know the street, but Spider isn't too keen on knocking on dozens of strangers' doors. But he has a cunning plan - something involving being nice to Anne... Mike joins them at the bar, and Alma wants to know if he has been civil to Hayley. Of course, says Mike, he's never been one to mock the afflicted. As he raises his voice, and looks pointedly at Hayley, she looks away.

Toyah and Dobber enter the cafe, and he orders two meals for them. Roy hints to Toyah that he could do with a hand behind the counter, but Dobber replies that this is "hard luck". He asks Toyah what they're going to do that afternoon. "Oh, you're not starting that again !", says Toyah. Dobber points out that everyone else on holiday was "at it". Toyah thinks he should respect her for not being so easy. At this point, Roy dumps some cutlery on their table in a very off-hand fashion. Dobber presses Toyah further. She thinks she will, soon. He asks if her Mum and Dad are out of the house that afternoon. [Hey mate, I think soon might have been weeks or months, not minutes !] Toyah shudders at the thought of her parents' house, it wouldn't be right. Besides, she hasn't got any, you know, precautions. Dobber will "take care" of that. And he might be able to get hold of his brother's motor. "Really ?", asks an easily impressed young Battersby.

Gary calls at Jim's house, and tells him that the audition didn't go well. He realises that buying a drum-kit and being a proper musician was just a dream, and he's sold the drums. Shame, so it is.

Natalie pops in to see Des, and asks him how he thinks the weekend went. Before long, they are discussing what it really means to move in together. Well, to be more honest, Natalie is firing awkward questions at Des, and he is answering with ums and ers. She realises that he is reluctant to make any real commitment - he'd be happy if she sold her house and moved in, but it alarms him to think of it happening the other way round.

Toyah is standing on the pavement, opposite her house, waiting for her no-mark boyfriend. Janice spots her and tries to engage her in conversation. Toyah is mortified less Dobber should arrive, and mutters responses like "go inside" and "bog off !". Naturally he arrives. In a hurry. In a bright red dick-mobile. [Amazingly, the credits mention a "stunt driver" - clearly specialist skills are required for driving at more than 5mph on the cobbled streets of Weatherfield !] Toyah gets into his car, still sadly impressed, and some tonsil tickling takes place. She asks if he had "got something" and apparently he has. Janice walks over and introduces herself. She tells Dobber she's heard a lot about him. "So what ?", says the charmless oik, and drives off. [Tears, mark my words, it'll all end in tears.]

Des enters the Rovers, to talk to Natalie. He's decided that he is serious about their future, and he'll make a commitment if that's what she wants. Natalie points out she doesn't want to be the latest in a long line of women who've moved in with him, only to move out again soon after. He agrees that this is probably a fair comment on his track record, but he's not proud of it.

Spider relays the latest news from the battle front to Alma. He found the right house, but the woman had moved on. However, Anne wants to meet him. Alma is worried about what he might be getting into.

Janice is telling Les of her first impressions of Dobber. "I wanted to slap him !", she says. [Didn't we all ?] Les was impressed with his motor. "Anyway, why's he called Dobber ?", wonders Janice, "has he got something to brag about, downstairs ??". [See !!] "What, like me you mean ?", asks Les. Janice gives him a *withering* look.

Roy is locking up the cafe, as Hayley arrives home. He asks how her day has gone, and in particular how she had got on with Mike Baldwin. It's clear from her answer that Mike has continued to make disparaging remarks, but Hayley tells Roy not to let himself get worked up about it. He fears that Mike's snide comments may be between themselves at the moment, but that he'll start talking in public eventually. Hayley says they will cross that bridge when they come to it.

We close this week with Toyah and Dobber. Not on a deserted beach at sunset, nor in a country house hotel, nor even a meadow on a summer's afternoon, but in Dobber's brother's car, in a lay-by, next to a greasy spoon caravan. Dobber asks "how about it ?". Toyah gets around to admitting that she's a virgin, but he says he'll show her what's what. "Let's get in the back", he adds romantically. [This is broad daylight and all !] Let's lower the curtain now before it gets any worse...

This episode was written by Sally Wainwright.

I've just realised we didn't see Sally or Kevin or Greg tonight. What a pleasant change. And now, yet another character to really *hate*. Dobber. I think it's fairly obvious where this storyline is heading (especially as I have already seen Monday's episode, but I'll not spoil it by revealing more) and yet it's been well written to appear perfectly believable (okay, the location of the final scene excepted) and perhaps even inevitable for a poor innocent like Toyah. Janice already has his measure, but is it too late ?

Overall rating (out of 5 stars): ***1/2

Right then, off to the spell checker. Lordy, just as weighty as ever. Still, if a new slimline update appears in the future, don't say I didn't warn you !

Take care, John Laird


Monday 5 October

*groggy clearing of throat*

Hiya :)

Yes, it's the notorious Post-Contress Update! I'm still recovering from the quite remarkable lack of sleep and vast intake of alcohol brought on by said Contress, so please bear with me in terms of spulling errors, grammatical mistakes and general lack of wit. I assure you normal (!) service will be resumed next week but for now you'll have to bear with me as I slowly recover from the wild, weird and wonderful Blackpool Weekend. If you're expecting a run-down of all the perverted debauchery you'll have to ask elsewhere since all I found were a group of lovely, charming people from all over the world with whom I had great pleasure talking... Err... Ok, I'll rephrase. If you want a run-down of all the perverted debauchery you'll just have to offer me a larger bribe than they did. ;)) Seriously though, everyone was rather delightful and the lewd and lacsivious behaviour was kept to a bare minimum (the naked man chained to a railing outside the Pleasant Hotel at 8pm on Saturday night providing the "bare" part...) although honourable mention in these stakes goes to "Lusty" Vivienne Smith for boasting a proud scream of "YESSS!" in front of a packed tour (mostly complete strangers, I should add) at the World Of Coronation Street when the question was raised whether anyone present had 'had' more lovers than Elsie Tanner... ;) (Last count for Elsie was 27, I believe!) Rumours/Protests that Vivienne misunderstood the question and was actually saying "Yes" to something completely different and far more innocent have been ignored in the name of humilia..*cough*..humour, despite the fact that they're quite likely to be true. ;)

Anyways, joking aside, I had an absolutely lovely time so thanks are in order to everyone (attendees and organisers) who made it that way... So lovely, in fact, was my weekend that I almost allowed myself to turn in a *gasp* LATE UPDATE in the name of rest but that just wouldn't do, so here's me best shot on low-batteries... Enjoy! (And forgive!) :)

After the titles proclaim this episode as being sponsored by Cadbury's Dairy Milk, we open in the presence of Les and Janice Battersby, early morning. As Les sits glued to the credits of a Breakfast TV show (you can hear the awful music...) Janice calls down Toyah (who apparently is running a bit late for school, having had a night on the tiles) before confiding in her husband that she's concerned about "that lad", in reference to Toyah's new, bizarrely nicknamed boyfriend, 'Dobber'. Les, only half-interested, says it'll do the girl good to "enjoy herself" after "that turn in London" but Janice is still *highly* suspicious of 'Dobber' and worries that Toyah's schoolwork may slip as a result of his influence. It's decided, albeit reluctantly (the lure of spookily long running Breakfast TV credits seems to be tempting him away from his fatherly duties!), that Les should have a word with her, although not before Janice has performed an obligatory interrogation first. The line of questioning is none too fruitful, as Toyah lies and says she was "out", "with her mates", "on the street" and "doing nowt" so Janice leaves for work, leaving her husband and daughter to have a heart-to- heart. He asks her to vow that she won't do "owt daft" with her new boyfriend ("Drugs... or... owt else") and, after assuring that he trusts her and is just worried for her Mum's sake, he finally gets her to make the promise. This pleases him as it means Toyah can get off to school on time and he can go back to watching that fascinating, eternally-running theme music on the telly.

Meanwhile outside, Roy is walking Hayley to work (hand-in-hand... awww! :)) and making sure that she'll be alright. She assures him she can handle it just as they run into the eternally chirpy Martin Platt. They exchange a bit of inconsequential small-talk as Nurse Platt disappears off to find a nearby five thousand to feed. Hayley uses this incident to try and make Roy feel better by mentioning that "there is life beyond Mike Baldwin, you know... Everyone else likes us!" but Sir Royston still seems very het up about the whole situation. The Lady In Red suggests that they invite Martin and Gail around to supper again, "our first supper party at your flat... as a couple", and this seems to make him perk up a little. He says it's a "good idea" and will ask Gail when he gets back to work. She kisses him on the cheek and heads off to the factory. :)

Over t'road, Toyah, sporting a school-skirt from The Bev Callard Wardrobe O'Skimp (TM) that would have gotten her a hefty detention in my day, bumps into Leanne and they exchange words which come round to 'Dobber'. Toyah confesses that Les and Janice are mad with her because she was out late last night with a boy she met on holiday prompting Lee to ask if this means she's "you know" (oh, you *know*)... The truth comes out that not only did she "you know" for the first time last night (argh!) but she also neglected to "use precautions", something which Leanne is displeased to hear, to say the least, and adds she's not surprised the Battersby Elders are annoyed. "They don't know what 'appened" insists Toyah but Leanne glances down at her half-sister's belly and says ominously "They will"... Rut roh... I think the penny drops.

In the MacDonald Household, Jim sits lifting weights with the greatest of ease, to the complimenting tones of Occupational Therapist Michael (as opposed to Psychotherapist Michael or Best-Friend Michael, both of whom are available as seperate toys... "Life in Plastic, it's fantastic!"). Michael-Doll thinks it's a good idea for Jim to "branch out" now he's "got some of his confidence back", adding that the MacDonald Household and The Rovers aren't very "adventurous" before finally putting forth the suggestion that Jim should take Liz out for a meal somewhere. A change of scenery, et al. Jim isn't sure he's ready for it.. "A room full of strangers and all that carry-on" he mutters and mumbles, in his inimitably cynical way but the Thankfully Thoughtful Therapist thinks this is just what Jim needs, prompting the Irishman to say "You know Michael, you could talk me into just about anything" before adding, "The question is, what will Liz say?"... One wonders aimlessly at this point if Michael could talk him into appearing on 'Ready Steady Cook!' again. ;))) (For the non-UK viewers, I apologise if that one made no sense...)

Meanwhile at The Cafe.. Sir R is humbly inviting Gail to a meal. Gail seems a bit surprised and insists it's her turn this time but Roy explains it's no problem "unless you think I'm being pushy". The Perplexed Platt smiles, tells him not to be silly, "umms", "ahhs" and then chirps that she and Martin are free tomorrow night and would love to come over. Roy says that if she feels guilty about it she can always have him and Hayley over at a later date, before whipping out his diary and suggesting that maybe they make a weekly thing out of it. The Platts' one week, Roy & Hayley's the next! Gail says she'll speak to Martin and smiles politely although it's obvious from the look in her eyes that she finds this idea to be somehow unappealling.

In The Rovers, as this is happening, Drinking-Partner Michael (the latest in this range of hot and happening toys!) stands at the bar buying a round of drinks as the two MacDonalds, who are sitting close by, discuss dinner. Liz seems pleasantly surprised that Jim has offered this and asks if he's sure he's up to it. He responds with "Of course I'm up to it... The question is are you? In case I make a fool out of meself" (You, Jim?? Never!!! Not you! Not Jim "Sober and Sensible" MacDonald!) and she happily accepts the invitation, suggesting they just do it and see what happens.

Janice walks in at this point and makes straight for the bar, like any wise woman would. ;) Upon reaching her destination, she discovers Roy and tells him their "drawing lots" on him over at the factory about who gets to run his fan club! (Incidentally, when they elect the president, I simply *must* sign up for a membership card! :)) Anyways, Roy is obviously a bit wary of this attention and tells Janice politely that a fan club "isn't really the right attitude to take". She reckons it is because Baldwin deserved everything he got (too bloody right! and then some!) and that she thinks Roy's "really fab" (I reiterate: too bloody right! and then some! :)) She then kisses him on the cheek and scampers off to the other end of the pub, giggling. Just then, the saloon doors burst open, the moody tones of Ennio Morricone fill the air and Baldwin El Bastardo, the meanest bandit in The West, strides up to the bar. "Flavour Of The Month, now, are we, eeeeeh gringo?" he sneers in a heavy Mexican accent, picking his blackened teeth with a splinter (Ok ok!!! I'll nip the tacky Western crap in the bud..). Roy retains his dignity and says "I wouldn't know" but Baldwin tells him to "Enjoy it while it lasts" which instantly hits the Terror Nerve with Sir R who asks, nervously "Meaning...??". Before the swine can answer, Hayley enters and he merely says, arrogantly "Oh look, here's your boyfriend" before adding, even more viciously, "There was a King Harold wasn't there? You know 1066 and all that? They all get in the eye eventually..." and walking off, sneering. I was going to write something like "The bastard! The absolute bastard!" here but decided that would be a ridiculous understatement (Top marks to Johnny Briggs however, for playing Baldwin at his very lowest to seriously teeth-grinding effect... I'm convinced I'll need major dental care before too long...). Anyways, Hayley can tell that Roy is upset and asks what Baldwin said, getting the half-stuttered answer of "Oh.. Nothing... Just the usual taunting...". She tells him not to let it get to him but he can only ask "But it does, doesn't it?" rhetorically, before heading back to work.

Superman Michael (Limited Edition doll available while stocks last!) is sitting with Liz, as Roy leaves, and isn't much surprised when she tells him about the forthcoming dinner. She catches on to the fact that it was his suggestion and thanks him, gushingly, saying "Oh, I don't know what we'd have done without you" and such likes. He plays it modestly, as he would, so she thanks him once more.

In The Cafe, Gail puts forth Roy's dinner plans to Martin who is about as impressed as punk rocker in a line-dance. When she adds that Roy wanted to make a weekly event out of it, Martin gasps with shock, dead-against the idea of spending a night in with good quality company as opposed to turning water into wine before a crowd of cured lepers. "Perhaps we should knock tomorrow night on the head then" he suggests, "Start as we mean to go on" but is dismayed when his wife reveals she has already agreed to it.

Toyah is sitting nearby and The Despicable Dobber walks in (He's been in the Street less than 2 episodes... I already can't stand the guy and am calling him names... Shame on me! ;)) to sit down and smarm at her in an arrogant and smug kind of way. In fact, he's so vain he probably thinks this scene is about hi...DOH!! He wants to "blag" a free meal out of Toyah but since she's not on waitress duty at the moment he has to take a raincheck. Just then he spots Ken Barlow lurking about and exclaims disgust loudly, as his apparent ex-teacher walks over. "Hello SIR" smarms Dobber in a hideously false manner, to which Ken replies "Hello Philip" (heh heh! heh heh!). They get into a brief and obviously uncomfortable conversation about what 'Philip' is up to these days and when asked if he's found a job yet he retorts "No sir, unfortunately. How about you, sir? Have you got a job yet?". Ouch! Ken leaves with a rather angry look on his face leaving Philip to badmouth him behind his back. Toyah seems, understandably, awkward and it goes without saying she doesn't mention the Private Lessons.

Back in the Rovers, Spider is talking with Alma and gobbling down peanuts at a rapid rate. He is, apparently, meeting with RoboAnneMalone(TM) later on in the day and is somewhat nervous. Alma offers her assistance but Spider stares wide-eyed into oblivion, like a psycho cartoon character and declines... "Nah, you can set up the bullet", he says, in a Frank Drebin kinda way, "But it's me who has to bite it!". I half-expected him to turn to the camera and say "Red Rock Cider: It's not red and there's no rocks in it", but mercifully the scene ends and cuts back to...

...The cafe, where Dobber/Philip gets up for a pee. Conveniently, Leanne comes in right about now and asks Toyah rather incredulously if that's the boy she's seeing. "Phil Dobson???" she exclaims and Toyah responds with "Yeah?? You used to fancy him!!" (eh? News to us!) before Leanne says that this was when she was "thirteen and didn't know any better" (This all seems a bit *too* convenient, no?). Apparently, he's notorious for "using women and dumping them" or "getting them in trouble with the police" but Toyah insists that the two of them are "in lurve". Gargh, not *AGAIN*! Jon Lindsey/Deidre Rachid... Greg Kelly/Sally Webster... Dobber Dobson/Toyah Battersby... And that's just in the last nine months alone!!! I really hope they do something a bit more productive with this one. So, back to the show, Leanne tells Toyah rather forcefully to go to the Doctors' in the afternoon and get a morning after pill, informing of all the details ("it works for 72 hours after the event", "it's all confidential these days", etc...) and ends her speech with the threat that if she "doesn't want to be pushing a snotty nosed kid around for her 17th birthday" she should get to it, pronto.
END OF PART ONE

The adverts are as unconvincing as ever. Hearing a bloke exclaim "Direct Line Rescue??? Is that new???" with boundless surprise just seems ridiculous in the light that adverts for this service have been bombarded down our throats for seemingly eons... Load o' rubbish soooo... on with...

PART TWO
Roy, diary back in hand, is telling Gail in T'Caf' that Hayley is "delighted" about the Dinner Party. Gail, however, reports that it won't be so easy to do the weekly thing, making the excuse that "Martin might find it a bit of a problem, you know, working shifts", so Roy suggests they all "play it by ear". This isn't quite the response Gail was after so she prompts politely "Don't you have any other friends you'd like to have round? I mean, we wouldn't want to monopolise you.." but Roy insists that if he felt they were "imposing" ("there's nothing worse than people imposing on you", he muses) he would tell them.

Over at a table, Dobber is being an arsehole to Toyah, something I wouldn't recommend for his health while Mike Plowman prowls the Earth! :) They discuss "last night" and Toyah suggests that in the future they should "use something" so they don't "catch things". He sneers indignantly that she "won't catch owt" off him before adding snottily that if it's that much of a problem they should just forget it altogether. Yawn, yawn, who brought The Bumper Book Of Cliche's back onto the Corrie set? More to the point, who let this wanker run free with it? (I'm sorry if I'm going against the grain here, especially since it's early days in this storyline but as I mentioned earlier I'm sick to death of these "Evil, nasty man with *blatantly* see-through lies" -vs- "Innocent naive woman in love" stories coming so quickly one after the other and I certainly think that in the light of the superb Toyah Tales we've had recently, Georgia Taylor is capable of so much more. I, personally, was much happier seeing her character go doo-lally over Spider Nugent than this wally... (All those comments are purely IMHO, I should add... Plus, as I said, this *is* early days yet... I may be forced to eat my words on this subject, who knows?))

Anyway, Natalie is moving into Des' house, it would seem, and is unpacking a lamp. Des thinks this is silly since he has plenty of lamps himself but Nat insists that it's just her way of making herself feel "at home" before adding that "that's the difference between men and women. You lot can live anywhere as long as it's 'okay' whereas we like to make the place our own". He smiles and says, almost sarcastically, "I'm sure whatever you do, it'll look great" as he unpacks a tremendously unexciting porcelain ornament. This leads to a snog. Not sure what else I can say, here, really. As I said at the beginning of this, I'm half- asleep and the more I type, the later it's getting!

Ken emerges from the Kabin and catches Janice on her way home. He wants "a word" with her and explains that he saw Toyah at lunchtime in the Cafe with a boy he "used to teach, Philip Dobson" prompting a sigh of "Not 'im again" from Janice who then asks "What was he like?" and is unsurprised to hear that 'Dobber' is often in trouble with the police for petty stealing and the likes (*snore*). Speak of the Devil and we cut over to the Cafe, which is almost closed. Dobber (Does that name sound soooo "Home And Away" or WOT??) enters, asking for a "pie and chips... on the house", but when he's told that they've stopped serving hot meals he decides to settle for "a tenner out of the till". Toyah looks a bit shocked and just then, Hayley enters, multiple bags under her arms. Gail jokes that she must be "shopping for Christmas" but Hayley smiles and says it's for tomorrow night's meal since Roy is "making something special" ("if a job's worth doing, it's worth doing well!", he adds, proudly). Ever the gentleman, he offers to help his girlfriend with the bags and they stumble up the stairs with the assistance of Gail. Of course, the fact that all three are now out of the room leaves Toyah free to, admittedly with a look of utter guilt on her face, remove ten pounds from the cash-till, as the evil Philip looks on, grinning like a failed audition for "The Omen III".

Jim and Friz, meanwhile, are sitting down for a meal in rather impressive surroundings for Weatherfield standards. ;) Candles everywhere, nice lighting, even a polite and unpatronising waiter! They ask to view the Wine List and exchange small-talk. As they do this, a dubious looking gent in a suit gives Liz the typical "Mmm.. let's go back to my place" looks from a darkened corner of the restaurant... Liz eyes him back, nervously. Hmm... Just like Hollywood.

Meanwhile, at their humble abode, Les and Janice sit in the living room discussing the situation their daughter has landed herself in. Les says he had the talk with her this morning and everything seems ok but Janice tells him what Ken said. "You can't stop her from seeing him", reasons Les, holding his wife's hand in a rare act of compassion "But what you *can* do is make sure she behaves sensibly". The front door opens and, sure enough, it's Toyah and Devil-Boy. Les offers the two of them a seat but they want to go upstairs, a prospect which displeases Janice to the extent that she *demands* vehemently they stay down in the living room before adding it's not that she doesn't trust Toyah: "It's just I don't like the company you keep". Dobber takes this as his cue to leave but Les defends him, by saying "Aw, c'mon, she didn't mean it like that, son". Not the best thing to say as Janice retorts "Oh yes I did... I mean, DOBBER? What kind of a name's that? Y'sound like a horse!" leading to the riposte: "Yeah, well at least I don't look like one!" (Obviously, this kid *wants* to be added to Mike Plowman's Hit List asap without passing "GO!" or collecting £200!). Les throws the "mouthy little squirt" out in a torrent of abuse and sends a Tantrumming Toyah to her room.

I'll be brief with this scene, since it left me so underimpressed and my batteries are running out, rapidly: Spider is visiting RoboAnneMalone(TM) at her office and she is questioning him about his lie/confession the other day that Curly has a crush on her. He blags it in much the same way he's done so far and she falls for it hook, line and sinker. The Robot admits that she had a big crush on Curly, also and then they both agree that Curly was set up. When asked if she has any ideas on whodunnit, RoboAnne says "Yes, I have actually..."

Back to the Battersbys' now, where Toyah is coming downstairs, sulkily, and heading for the kitchen. The door goes and Janice instantly reckons it to be Devil-Boy but thankfully it's only Leanne who heads straight for the kitchen also ("I'll just make meself a coffee", being her excuse) to talk to Toyah who has, apparently (God knows when!), been to the doctors' for the Morning After Pills, which she is presently taking with a glass of water. Leanne is glad she took the advice but says sternly "and next time... take precautions" before leaving back to the living room, oddly without a coffee. C'mon, continuity people! ;P

I'm amazed at the amount of *really* short scenes in tonight's show, it seems to cut back and forth all the time, so apologies for the possible disjointedness of this update. We're back with Spider and RoboAnneMalone(TM) now, as they discuss conspiracy theories for the upcoming Hollywood animated-movie "Who Framed Curly Watts?". The 'Bot starts to reel off a long story which doesn't sound too far removed from the truth about how a co-worker had a crush on Curly but the affection wasn't returned so, unable to cope with rejection ("Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned", she says, tackily), she set the poor guy up. When quizzed as to who this culprit is, RoboAnne points the finger at ALMA BALDWIN(dunno about you but I'd guessed this about five minutes ago)! Apparently Alma confessed her alleged love for Curly to RoboAnne in a moment of weakness. The Bot suggests that her and Spider "set up" Alma with ransom notes, in much the same way as Curly was set up... Spider says he'll "do anything to clear Curly's name"... I begin to wonder where Scooby Doo is at this point.

At the posh restaurant, Jim has wheeled himself off to the restrooms, dropping his napkin by mistake on the way out. Mr Dubious in the dark corner takes this opportunity to approach the now-solo Liz and say, smoothly "Your friend dropped this", handing the napkin back to her. She thanks him and he tells her that Jim is a "lucky man" (oh dear, oh dear, *SOMEONE* doesn't watch Corrie ;))) adding "so would I be if you'd ever care to get in touch" while handing over his business card. Liz (unexpectedly!) lies and says she's a "happily married woman" so Senor Sleaze oozes away back into the corner again. Just then Jim returns and realises that the odd-fellow had been hitting on his companion. Liz insists that nothing happened but Jim is now angered and decides to go over and start yelling at the guy, threatening that he would "batter" him if he wasn't in the chair. "You think you've got the right cos I'm paralysed?" he asks, but the anonymous stranger leaves in silence. Liz says there was no need for it but Jim, now set off on a familiar trail of bitterness and jealously accuses Liz of "enjoying" an "able-bodied man" coming on to her... After putting up with his ranting, she gives him the Inverse-Midas Speech: "You don't change do you? You ruin everything you touch, Jim" and then the credits roll.

So that's that. Sorry I can't be more enthused but it was, on the whole, a rather average episode. Certainly not a bad one and not lacking in strong scenes, but there's something about this Toyah storyline that's worrying me... Can't put my finger on it right now, mind. Of course, my tiredness didn't help things but still, I'm sure we'll be back to normal next week. :) No further comments, yr'honour. Battery death imminent!!!

Take care! :) The Rattler

This Monday Update was sponsored by James Ray's Gangwar (what I was listening to) and Stella Artois (what I was drinking)


Wednesday 7 October

Hi everyone,

I have bravely[read stupidly:)] taken the plunge to step into the much esteemed shoes of CP to do the Wednesday updates. However, this will be on alternate weeks and to give you some variety, I believe Roz Mitchell will be covering the alternate Wednesdays with me, awaiting confirmation.

Already I've suffered with first night nerves resulting in me taping over Wednesday's episode so had to wait for Sunday for the repeat omnibus, hence the delay for which I humbly apologise.

Ive only done two updates previously so be gentle with me kind viewers and allow me the same privileges as Sally Webster...the occasional cock up!!

Enough of this pre-emptory drivel, on we go with last Wednesday's update.

Tonights episode opens in Chez Battersby. Janice is trying to insult Toyota's intelligence by trying to bribe her with a shopping trip and a promise of clothes. [Well it works for me:)] However, RToyah isnt as green as she's cabbage looking and sees right through Les and Janice's attempts to sweet talk her away from Dobber. [ I cant say I blame them. I mean, if your daughter cam home saying she was in love with someone who sounded like they were named after a garden implement, wouldnt you worry?] And surely, can i be mistaken, or did i see Les in the kitchen making breakfast? I thought he needed a map to show him where the kettle was!

Over in The Kaff, Roy tells Gail that he is still worried about his altracation[hmmm...Mr malaprop I presume] with Mike Baldwin. Roy then brings up the subject of the till being short by 10 pound. He asks Gail if she gave the wrong change to anyone. She rightly asks him the same thing and tells her it could just as likely be him.

Whilst La Mouton fluffs up the bouffant ready for work, she asks Michael [Lets get physio, physio, lets get physio...]if Jim has told him what happened at the restaurant. Jim is still feeling ultra sorry for himself and says that Liz only got chatted up cos she was "in the company of a raspberry"[frankly Jim, if its fruit we're talking about, Id say you were more of a lemon, so you are!]. Jim seems to think that Liz is just a bit pissed off about what happened and he tells Michael that thats how they are with each other. "Thats why we married, thats why we got divorced, and thats why we got back together again" [no comment].

Over at the salon, Audrey is onto the jobcentre to try and recruit some fresh blood to train up in blue rinses and marcel waves. Maxine is earwigging whilst hayley tries to explian how she wants her hair doing. Maxine is being her usual vacuous self and Audreh finally sorts Hayley out with an appointment, proving that she can do two things at once whilst Maxine has problems with one thing at a time. Audreh tells the person at the other end that she has seen lots of people reading little cards "well, those that can read". Job specification according to Audreh, get on with people, initiative, and no body odour. Nice to know she's got priorities aint it!

Dobber picks Toyah up from School. [Get rid of him Toyah! now! cries the nation] She tells him that they have to be careful and then he pulls off at 90 miles an hour in the car...and no seat belt for Toyah.

Michael and La Mouton are in the Rovers. Liz guesses that Jim has been saying that its her fault about what happened in the restaurant. Michael says its typical of someone in Jims position. Liz says no, just typical of Jim.

Mike Baldwins at the bar as Hayley walks in looking for the girls from the factory. "Not here says Mike, except for Liz and she's busy. Try The Kaff, you get all sorts hanging out there!" [boo hiss boo hiss]. She then reminds him that she's finishing early and asks if he's forgotten. No he says. He hasnt forgotten anything about her.

Liz tells Michael that she doesnt want Jim, mobile or paralysed. Michael tells her that Jim doesnt want her pity. "In the end, thats all he's got!" she says. [Funny, but it doesnt seem that long ago since Liz was telling Jim that there were 50 ways to please your lover]

Over at The Kaff, the original whingeing pom, Martin, is telling Gail he'd rather be chewing his toenails into attractive topiary arrangements than have dinner with Hayley and Roy[well, he didnt really say that but you get the gist!] Gail tells him that he'll enjoy scintillating conversation with two interesting people and the Plattypus asks who else is invited![On one hand I can see martin's problem, I mean who wants to discuss the pro's and cons of Wainwrights locomotives, but on the other hand, since when have the Platts had such a whirlwind of a life that they can afford to be bitchy about being asked to dinner by Roy and Hayley, or anyone for that matter, they ought to be grateful quite frankly!]

Over in the corner of The Kaff, Spider tells Alma of Bunny boilers latest plot to incriminate her and make out that she is the one obsessed by Curly and that she, Alma, is the one out for revenge. Alma finally suggests what everyones been saying for weeks. Get Ann Malone on video doing the dastardly deed.

Here endeth part the first...

Part two beginneth with... La Toyota doing the tonsil tango with 'The Garden Tool', in a car, in a car park, somewhere in Weatherfield. Dobber continues with his emotional blackmail and asks Toyah to take 40 pound out of the till. The reason? She has to pay her half of all the expenses of him driving her round in the countryside looking for ideal spots for a back seat pasa doble! [Dont do it Toyah! Toyah has become a fast favourite with me, acted well, she inspires interest and care about what happens to her character] Dobber tells her to take it off the customers and not ring it into the till.[how come Roy didnt suggest Toyah earlier when he was talking to Gail?] As she gets out of the car Leanne strides over and Dobber speeds off after mentioning Toyahs 'great legs'. Leanne asks her if she'd taken the second Pill."Of course, Im not stupid" says Toyah.[the jury's still out on this one].

Back at the salon, Fred is deriding Fiona. Maude says how Fiona appealed to the younger generation but Audreh will appeal to a wider clientele. Fred says show Audreh will need more than pensioners perms to keep it going. Audreh and Fred[sigh, my hero] discuss staffing problems. Maxines paranoia reaches a climax as she takes out someones rollers. Maud speaks up for Maxine but Audreh says how she's "known enough blond heads to recognise a flibbety gibbet when she sees one! What she needs is reliability and commitment."

Back at The Kaff, Hayley tells Roy about seeing Mike Baldwin but plays it down so that Roy doesnt get angry again. Roy suggests she forgets about him and lays the table ready for dinner. [womens lib is alive and unwell at The Kaff]

[still in the kaff] and Ken asks Toyah why she doesnt want her extra tuition and Toyah says how she gets skitted at school for being a swot. Ken tries to reassure her by saying how she has a talent which didnt show at school[hmmmm...and just what would that be ken?] ken gives her the 3 quid for what he's had in the cafe but after he's gone she pockets the money. Martin returns, makes a few sarcastic comments to Ken about having dinner with Roy and Hayley and then goes to speak with Roy. "Mmmm something smells good" says Martin.

Over at Freshcos, Alma is watching Spider and Ann Malone in the freezer. [I know someone who'd love to be checking Spiders goods out in the cold storage, dont I Glenda:)] But Trev, the security man comes back just as Alma is about to retrieve the tape.

Back at Chez Battersby, Janice is giving Toyah the money for Ken's tuition.[we know where thats going, dont we girls and boys!] Toyah asks about the money that Janice was going to use for the shopping trip. She says it would have been on tick. Toyah suggests getting a credit card. "I'll be in t'poor house with one of them, I know what im like!" Les tells her that theyll be in the Rovers later. "I thought you didnt have any money" protests Toyah. "I dont" says Les.

Back at The Kaff, dim lighting, candles and Roy and Hayley and the Camel and the Platypus are having dinner. Martin says how he wished he'd seen Baldwin's face when Roy had thrown the beer at him[was that really a week ago when we were all at blackpool] Hayley wonders what Alma sees in him and Martin says "you can say that about all couples" Martin continues with "what does Rita see in Alec? what does Roy see in Hayley for that matter. Everybodys different, some are more different than others". A look of knowing passes between Roy and Hayley. Martin continues his unwittingly cringy but ironic diatribe."I used to think it was jus a case of big ones, small ones, fat ones and thin ones till i started working there." Gail tells him "none of your 'bodies of Weatherfield stories' Martin, especially the amputation ones." "You'd be amazed what you can cut off and sew back on these days" says Martin. Hayley is shifting around conspicuously on her chair as Gail tells him that no one wants to hear about that, Hayley in mid-cringe, agrees.

Outside, illuminated by a convenient lamp post, Garden Tool Boy and Toyah are in his penile substitution vehicle, oops I mean souped up Ford Escort. and he's having a go at her for only getting a fiver. She says it was quiet in The Kaff and that she has to be careful. She tells him that she hasnt had a real boyfriend before[you still havent sweetie! and i should know] and that RLeanne says .... Dobber tells her to shut up about her leanne, he's not doing it with her is he.[oh the sweet age of romance is not dead.] Toyah tells him that she can get more money on friday when she gets paid and her mum gives her some money. Dobber says he cant keep shelling out [For what may i ask?] They drive off, Toyah still hasnt learnt to fasten her seat belt]

Back to the meal, Martin asks why Baldwins got it in for them. Hayley says its her and Roy says that its because she works too hard. Gail suggests inviting Mike and Alma round. Hayley doesnt think that will work.[a bit like inviting Vlad the impaler to a steak barbecue!] Martin compliments them on the meal and Roy suggests doing it again sometime, like next week?!!

In the Rovers, Maxine interrogates Fred about Audreh's plans for staff. Maude offers some advice in her own inimitably subtle fashion. "What she's looking for is reliability and what have you given, late mornings, leaving early etc." You can see Maxine thinking this through, its painful to watch the machinations of her poor vacuous blond head.

Alma meets up with Spider and tells him about not getting the tape. Spider tells her that if they dont get the proof, Curly will not be able to come back to the country without the police arresting him straightaway.

WWWelll, tth th thats all for now folks, I leave you in the trusty hands of Roz for this Wednesday's update and Ill see you all next week.

Bye for now,

Ruth aka Roofy


Friday 9 October

Hiya folks!!!! ... Time again for another update....

At long last, I've got round to doing my Blackpool Ping report. Do take alook !

Have fun folks and thanks to everyone who made it an enjoyable week!!Anyway... without further ado, it's time for the update, sponsored by Cadbury's Dairy Milk

The episode commences with Spider catching Alma unawares in the Street. He is anxious to find out whether she has managed to get the video tape from Freshco, which, they hope, will incriminate Anne Malone and provide the evidence necessary to get Curly off the hook. She tells him that she's not had a chance to retrieve it, but Spider is concerned that the store may record over it and they would lose the evidence. She promises to do her best - she will watch the security guard and seize her chance.

At the Salon, Maxine is finishing off with a client and afterwards, Audrey remarks that, judging by the body language, the client didn't seem very pleased. Maxine tries to make light of this, but it is clear that Maude's previous words to her have sunk home and she is concerned about the security of her job. Audrey is reading a letter and Maxine changes the topic of conversation - Audrey says the letter is from her solicitor, everything is going well and this time next week, the Salon will be Maison Audrey - Maxine goes into brown-nose mode, telling Audrey how much she likes the name, "It's so French" says Maxine. "Yes, European" agrees our Audrey. She needs something that reflects her - modern and stylish, she continues, which is what she will be looking for in her staff. When she asks Maxine, whether she has finished, our Max finds some extra work to do, some mirrors which need wiping. Audrey is impressed by her attitude, telling her that she applauds initiative and hard work, that's what she will be looking for in the new staff. She tells Maxine that she needs to pop to the Town Hall for a short while and asks whether Maxine can be left on her own. "Any time" replies RMax.

At Freshco, Alma has sneaked her way into the security office to do the deed. She makes her way to the video recorder and removes the tape, which, she hopes, will provide her and Spider with the evidence they need against Anne Malone. Just at that point, Anne comes into the office and catches Alma red-handed. She takes the tape from her. Alma tries to explain that things are not what they might seem, but Anne is cock a hoop at catching Alma and tells her what she thinks - she has caught her stealing Company property and tells Alma to wait in her office.

At the McDonald's household, Jim is being taken out by Michael, who says not to worry and promises to Liz that he will look after Jim, just as she does.

Back at Freshco, Anne switches off one of the security monitors and attaches an "out of order" sticker to it.

Audrey is discussing business matters with Fred at the Salon. She tells him she thinks Fiona went wrong with her marketing. "Dead important, is that!" booms our hero. It was never snappy and perky and modern, she continues, brand identity is important, something that says 'Audrey is something really, really special.' "She is that, especially in my eyes" slavers Fred. She tells Fred that she gets a lot of elderly people coming into the Salon - the problem is they are "old", but in her terminology they are not old, "they're just advanced citizens." So she'll be able to do deals for them like 'the Advanced SuperSaver'. "That's a train ticket isn't it?" replies our hero. "Yes Fred, yes. You're catching on," beams Audrey, as she points out how, if someone decides to go on an outing to Cleethorpes, they will go and buy their Advanced SuperSaver and then they'll think "I must get my hair done, as well." "Why, it's a stroke of genius is that, I say, a stroke of genius!!!" replies Fred, "you'll have a whole chain of Salons before you can say 'split ends'. Oh, you can service me any time, Audrey." At that point, Maxine comes in with tea for the troops, well, for the generals, anyway. She is well past her going home time, but had found "a few odds and ends to do" to put her in Audrey's good books - Audrey agrees that Maxine can go off home.

At the Mallets', Gareh is busy decorating - in comes Judeh, unexpectedly. She hadn't been expected back until the following day, but she missed Gareh too much. She calls him over for a "snog" - she is delighted with his handiwork and is pleased that he even remembered to cover the furniture - she comments that it appears to have grown. He pulls back the covers to reveal a double cot and tells her that he sold his drum kit to buy it. She is overjoyed at his thoughtfulness and they embrace.

Toyah is about to leave the café with the "Boyfriend from Hell" aka Dobber. Gail asks to speak to Toyah in private and while handing over her wages, tells her that the till was £10 short in the last few days. She tells her not to take it the wrong way - she knows it's not Toyah, well, not deliberately anyway, but tells her that just because she is in love, to be careful not to let her mind wander off her duties. Toyah looks relieved.

Spider is talking in the Rovers to Lorraine about Anne Malone. He tells her that Anne won't get away with her plans. Lorraine tells him that he has to go to the police but Spider is not convinced - it's only their word against Anne's and as far as the police will be concerned, Curly proved his guilt by running away. He tells Lorraine that Anne Malone has asked him to be her go-between, an ally. If only he could get that tape before going to see her, then he would have something with which to bargain, to confront her that she has done something illegal. At that stage Alma comes in - Spider is pleased to see her and asks whether she has the tape. She, however, tells him that she has been sacked.

... and the theme tune comes in, on cue for the end of part 1

After the ads, it's part 2
The second part of the programme commences at the Rovers with Alma, Spider and Lorraine. Spider pronounces that Anne has gone too far this time, while Alma is concerned what Mike will have to say about her getting sacked, at her age, for theft of company property. Lorraine tells Spider that he will have to do something now, something sensible, he is trying to out-think someone who is off her head, she tells Spider. How can she possibly be outwitted? Anne wants Curly, so the way out is for Spider to tell Anne that the only way she will get Curly is if she creates a safe environment for him to return to. When Spider asks how are they going to do that, Lorraine tells him that this is not his problem - all he has to do is to tell her that this is what she has to do to get Curly back and leave it for her to fix. Until she straightens things out, he is to advise Curly to stay where he is. Spider is overcome by this brain-wave and rushes off to do the necessary.

Michael has called round to the McDonalds and Liz is rather surprised to see him. She asks whether Jim has forgotten something. He tells her that he has been to a number of seminars and thought it would be more useful to see Liz while Jim was busy. Liz asks him through. He wonders how long she will be able to keep this pretence going.

At Freshco, Anne Malone rings Trevor the security guard and tells him to go to the front entrance of the store. She tells him she is going home and she wants him to be the visible side of their security. He is not to leave his post, no-one is to get past.

Liz is telling Michael that what she said earlier was merely the result of frustration, than anything. When challenged, she admits that she DID mean SOME of what she said, but every relationship has got its problems, hasn't it, she muses. Michael wonders whether this should lead to one of the partners to lead a life of pretence. Liz is puzzled at why Michael is discussing this with her. He tells her that he takes more of a holistic approach - he believes that a client is unlikely to get much better until all the different aspects of their life are in some sort of harmony with each other. Liz scoffs at the prospect of harmony in the McDonald household, "harmony, oh yeah, yeah, we get a lot of that around here." Michael points out that as Jim is not going to get better until he is living in the world of reality, if Liz doesn't love him anymore, she would be better off telling him. Liz is outraged at the intrusion and tells him he should mind his own business - she wonders how he might feel if she came sniffing around his marriage. He replies that it might have helped - Liz is puzzled by the reply and Michael looks to leave, but Liz presses him to explain. He does - he tells her that when you are working in the helping business, sometimes you get so focused on the needs of your clients, that you might not even notice the needs of the people a lot closer to home - and sometimes they need you a lot more. He confides that his wife had found someone who could give her the attention she needed at the time and they both seemed happy - he sees the children regularly and they're both happy, so we're all..... "happy?" volunteers Liz. Michael is embarrassed by the situation and tells her he needs to go back. When Liz finds out that the training session is due to finish in an hour's time, she offers him a drink, which he accepts.

Anne Malone makes her way to the Deep Freeze Room, to do some sabotage work. She opens the door, lets herself in and pulls the heavy door behind her.

In the car, Dobber and Toyah are talking - she is asking him about his father, is he old? "Yeah, about 35, or summat," he replies. She asks whether she will get to meet him but Dobber is not very happy at this prospect. Toyah asks why not and wonders whether he is ashamed of her. He denies this, but points out that they should be thinking about keeping a place of their own and not of meeting his folks. She is starry-eyed at this prospect and points out that her sister got married at her age. He pooh-poohs the idea of marriage but says that if they got their names down with the council, she could keep nicking until they got the deposit. She tells him that she is not going to steal anymore - it's stupid.

Spider is outside Freshco and tells the security guard that he has come to see Miss Malone. He admits he is two hours early for his appointment and asks whether he can wait for her in the store. The guard replies that Anne Malone doesn't wish to see anybody and tells him to "bog off."

Liz has been telling Michael about the "life and loves of Liz and Jim". You want to sell the screen rights to that, jokes Michael and she agrees, "if Liz and Richard can do it, and I expect that somebody will do it about Liz and Philip one day as well, I should get in there while there's still room." She asks him to confirm that his professional advice is to be honest with Jim, which he does. Liz bemoans the sense of failure she feels about it all, there was a time he could have given her a way out - she should have taken it, but she was in love with the idea of being needed - she tells Michael that this was a strange new feeling in her relationship with Jim, she had never felt needed before, at least not by him. "And now you do and it's not really enough," adds Michael. She agrees with his statement, pointing out that the scene in the restaurant had brought out the feeling in her of being desired. She apologies for being so open, but Michael dismisses her protestations. She continues, the feeling was nice and it had got her wondering what it would be like to be held again properly and as soon as she though it, she felt guilty. He points out this is understandable, she is a nice person, it is only human to feel that way. She admits to being a very confused human. Michael makes to leave, the session will soon be finished - he tells her that he would be very happy to continue the conversation some other time, if it has helped her. She admits it has. "All part of the service," is his reply.

Anne is still in the freezer room, merrily at work carrying out her sabotage. The Security guard has come into the store and goes over to a stack of beer cans just outside the Freezer room. He picks one off and opens it. As he does so, he notices that the freezer room is not secured. He takes the padlock and locks the door securely, leaving Anne Malone trapped inside.

Michael is leaving and is telling her she has nothing to feel guilty about. There is a test for situations like that, it's very unprofessional, he has never done it before, in fact, if anyone found out, he'd be struck off immediately. She is intrigued and asks what it is. Having built up to the moment, he then kisses her. She expresses outrage. Having realised he has overstepped the mark, he apologies for his indiscretion. He is flustered and apologises for going too far. Liz is outraged asking whether this is part of his therapy. He denies that and confesses that he must have felt like that man in the restaurant when he had looked at her. He apologises again and makes to leave but Liz' mood has changed - she asks him to hold her and when he does so, she tells him he may kiss her. They embrace passionately.

Anne Malone has finished her deed and goes to the door of the Freezer Room. Realising she has been locked in, she starts banging on the door, but to no avail. Meanwhile the security guard has gone back to his office. He sits down in front of the monitors, but, of course, the monitor which could alert him to Anne's problem, is switched off. Oblivious to what is going on, he drinks his beer.

Back at the pub, Alma is asking Curly how it went - it didn't, he tells her. However, the security man had told im she had gone home, the only thing he can do is to go to the store in the morning before it opens.

Back at Freshco, Anne Malone is frantic.... She is still locked in the Freezer room, her cries of help unheard by the security guard.... .....and with that.... it is the cue for music and credits

Episode written by Peter Mills

All material is, and remains, copyright property of Granada Television.

Well, how was it for me? One of those coming to a head type of episodes, as Michael makes his move on Liz and Anne looks like coming unstuck in her plot to set up Curly and now Alma. The salon is in the middle of a handover, with all the uncertainties that this situation brings - new brooms and all that... Meanwhile, Gareh and Judeh start preparing for parenthood....

Good moments.. well, for me, the Ice Queen becoming a reality???

Apart from that, a competent middle of the road episode.....

Anyway that's it for now.. Until the next time, take care...

Hugs and kisses from Tinky^ Regards, Alan


Sunday 11 October

This week I've had to leave the preamble until the end, to make sure I had time to actually get the update written. There's only a few minutes left before the bell goes [metaphorically], so not much time to ramble on about the trivia and minutae of my life over the last seven days.

One nice interlude in an otherwise rather uneventful week was an invitation to the evening reception after a college friend's wedding. This was our first remarriage for Mrs L and I, shows we're reaching that sort of age, I suppose. Some of the other guests were folks I'd known at college and had hardly seen since. A quite unfathomable 17 years, in one or two cases. The really funny thing is that they hadn't really changed much at all. Perhaps we haven't either. Shows what a fine upstanding undergraduate I was all those years ago !

But that's enough nostalgia, let's hasten off to Weatherfield to see what's going on in the lives of the residents of Coronation Street...

Act 1
The episode opens noisily with Spider hammering on the metal shutters outside the Freshco store. It is clearly the next day. The security guard opens up to find Spider demanding to see Anne Malone. The guard protests she is not there, but Spider rushes inside anyway and starts to search the store. [In case anyone is wondering, security guards are in the main very poorly paid and yes this probably is about the level of intelligence and fitness to be found.] Spider notices the red light on the walk-in freezer. The guard tells him this means someone is inside, but that can't be right, no everything's pretty knackered in the store and it's just faulty. Still, he'll open up and check. Their jaws drop as they peer in through the cold misty air and see Anne sitting in a chair, spraycan in hand. And very very dead. [Now call me picky, but I think it more likely that she would have been curled in a ball on the floor. Still, the outcome is the same.]

Sally is angry with Rowsie and Surphie, as someone has spilled orange juice on the carpet. But worse, on some of Greg's precious CDs as well. There'll be trouble, and poor wee Surphie gets the thick end of it from her mum.

With no further ado, it's back to Freshco where the SOCO [Scene of Crime Officers] are taking photographs of the Ice Maiden. In the manager's office is Spider and the bumbling DI Fox[?]. The detective [actually "dick" would be appropriate in this case] tells Spider that he thinks he was lying earlier when he'd said he'd seen Curly around town. "You're my prime suspect now", he tells Spider. Spider is alarmed. "Book him Stanno !", says rent-a-cop. [I wish I could remember where that line comes from...]

Jim Macdonald is full of enthusiasm after the seminar the night before. He thinks he might re-train in computing, and he's taking up basketball in his spare time. He puts Liz on a spot, without realising, when he observes that Michael hadn't stayed long at the seminar before rushing off, only to return later "in a right state". Poor Jim has obviously forgotten what an evening of passion with Liz can reduce a man to !

Sally rushes into the cafe to pick up a sandwich. Gail asks her how Greg is taking the news about having Sally's girls to stay. Sally admits that he still doesn't know about it. Anyway, it's not a problem, as "he loves them !". "He'll have to...", mutters Martin as she leaves.

Natalie has hired the entire Edwin Shirley trucking fleet to transport her belongings, and Des is shocked at how much of it there is. "I'll have to move out to make room for you to move in !", he says. But there's more, as they say. He asks if she'll be selling the rest with her house, but it turns out that she has decided not to sell up just yet, and will be renting her house out instead.

Down at the police station, the farce continues between the DI and Spider. "You've got form", says the boy in blue. "It was environmental protest !", protests our hero. The DI accuses Spider of being Mr Big, with Curly just a pawn in his evil plans. Spider has been "involved" with the store earlier, in the great prawn incident. "What, someone threatened a fish, and you killed a human being ?", asks the boggled DI. Spider asserts that Anne has set them all up. However, the detective has an ace up his sleeve. "Who in their right minds would find Mr Watts attractive ?". Spider is led back to the cells while further developments develop

Intermission
[Just stare at this spot for a couple of minutes. . . . There. . . Exactly like the adverts.]

Act 2
Natalie and Des are having a drink in the Rovers. Des is sulking. He showed her his, and she wouldn't show him hers. Or rather, he was prepared to sell his house, and now Natalie has changed her mind about selling hers. He disappears off into town. Some plan is afoot.

Mike is endeavouring to get his workers back to the factory. He asks Sally where "lover boy" has got to. She tells him he's due back any time, after all, he's out getting new orders isn't he ? "Not so as you'd notice", replies Mike. Janice adds her tuppence-worth - "Maybe he's all mouth, like his Dad". Sally looks annoyed.

Over at the Macdonald homestead, Liz is just about to leave for work. There is a knock at the door. Gosh, what a coincidence. That'll be Michael, says Jim. "I know what you're up to !", he adds chirpily. Liz is aghast. [What, was my hair all messed up the other night ? Me blouse undone ? Me skirt hitched up too far ?] "What do you mean ?", she asks and rushes off to answer the door before Jim can say any more. Sure enough, it's Michael so it is. They have a whispered conversation just inside the front door, and Michael apologises for the night before, and tells her they need to get their relationship back on a strictly professional basis. Liz leaves as Jim calls Michael through to the back room. He tells Michael too, that he knows what's going on. Michael's eyes dart about the room as well. But Jim has decided that Liz and Michael have decided to buy Jim a computer, and nothing else. Michael tells him that he could approach a Forces organisation, Jim being an ex-soldier, but Jim wants to stand on his on feet [as it were].

The wanderer returns. Sally is overjoyed to see Greg back at the flat. "Say hello to Greg, girls !", she cries. Rowsie and Surphie, bless them, muster no enthusiasm at all as they mutter "hello". Greg hands Sally a big bunch of flowers. [Vastly overrated in my opinion, flowers.] The girls demand to know if Greg has brought them anything too. [Acting the adults off the stage in this scene !] Greg has an idea - on the way home, they can call in at the corner shop and get some sweets. Sally needs to be alone with Greg all of a sudden, and we get the "girls, off to your room" line. Greg notices. "Their room !", he wonders. Sally starts to explain how she had tried to tell him, several times, and of course Kevin has agreed. Greg is annoyed that he wasn't consulted at all. He points out how small the flat is.

Back at the police station, Spider is looking much happier, while the DI looks like a bulldog who's been stung by a wasp. A search of Anne Malone's house has turned up some incriminating evidence that backs up Spider's story and in addition Alma has made a statement to much the same effect. They have also found the missing videotape in the store [the one showing the meeting between Anne and Spider - sorry I've kind of forgotten what it was about exactly]. The detective will let Spider go, after he's made a token point of detaining him, on behalf of all the meat-eaters in the world.

Straight back to Greg's flat, where he is attempting to win over the girls by plying them with sweets. Sadly, he gets their names confused. Don't worry, says Sally, it'll work out. He wonders what's for dinner. [And where's me pipe and slippers while you're at it, woman.] Sally tells the girls that Greg likes Italian food, and they love spaghetti, so... Greg decides he's not hungry after all. It's time to talk, and Sally gets as far as "girls..." before Rosie mumbles "we'll go to our room !". [Boy, these kids are going to be seriously disturbed.] Sally lays out her defence - he always knew she had children, she couldn't leave them with Kevin, that's why we went to the solicitor, to get custody. Oh and by the way, she's been to see another solicitor, and things are moving along now. *And* she's been looking at houses ! Greg is angry, but backs down quickly, claiming to have been preoccupied with getting their business off the ground. Sally suggests they could read the girls a story before they go to sleep. Greg decides he'd rather pop down to the pub, and unwind there. Then when he gets back the brat^h^h^h^h girls will be asleep, and he and Sally can spend some time together.

In the Rovers, Lorraine welcomes Spider back. They sit down with Alma. While they're pleased to be off the hook, they'd never imagined Anne might end up dead. Lorraine wonders if Curly will return now. There is some mild joshing about setting up a private investigation business.

Leg fans may be cheered up by the sight of Liz lying on Jim's sofa. He chides her for falling asleep in front of the TV. [Standard operating procedure in our house - Mrs L conks out 5 minutes before the end of every programme !] Jim has already made up his bed, and suggests that Liz should sleep upstairs as she obviously is in need of a good night's kip. He tells her that he knows what she is planning with Michael, and no thanks. Liz's eyebrows shoot up again. "You and Michael, and the computer !". "Right !" says Liz, relieved. And absolutely none the wiser.

It's time for bed over at Greg's flat too, and Sally has made up the sofa bed in the lounge and turned on some more romantic lighting. Clad in a silky nightie, she hears Greg arriving. He spoils the mood by asking what's wrong with their bed. She tells him the girls can't sleep in the lounge as they have to go to bed so early. He makes to go into the bedroom to hang up his jacket, but Sally tells him to stay out, lest he wakes the girls up. Angrily, he hurls his jacket across the room instead. Sally tries to placate him, telling him yet again that they "can make it work". Greg has a face like thunder.

We finish up tonight's episode at Des' house, where Natalie is also waiting for her man to return. And return he does, with an estate agent's sign in his hand. What's that for, she asks him. Des is determined that she should sell up and move in with him permanently. As his wife ! Natalie is taken aback. "Marry me", says Des. "Yes", says Natalie, and they embrace.

This episode was written by Peter Mills.

This episode was perfectly missable. It had a tired, going-through-the- motions feel about it, only enlivened by a couple of amusing little moments from Rosie and Sophie. Further dissection is probably unwise !

Overall rating (out of 5 stars): *1/2

Let's hope for better next week ! See you then.

John Laird


Monday 12 October

Greetings, Update Fiends!

Well, what can I say? If the whole idea of an Update is to inform those who were unfortunate enough to not catch an episode exactly what they *missed* then here I present this week's Monday Update:

"N O T H I N G ."

Oh, alright, that's a bit of a cop-out but even so, this has to be one of the poorest episodes I've seen since the Darren Whateley story a few months ago (which never *did* properly end, did it? Not that I'm complaining, mind!). As a result, I really don't feel like going into excessive detail about half the scenes so this week's proceedings will be of a slighter slimmer, duller volume than is normal. Here's hoping for better next time around!!!

We start on a high note... Well, the Dairy Milk sponsorship ad and the theme tune, anyway. After that it's all downhill with a bullet. Greg and Sally are asleep in the makeshift bed she has made out of the couch. The gurrrrls burst into the room fiending for "Breakfast!! Quick! Quick! Breakfast!" and Rursie makes it quite sternly clear she wants "Cornflakes and toast!" (adventurous, eh?) while Greg murmurs something about the time (it's apparently 7am...). As Surphie squeals out her desire for an egg with her breakfast, Sally gets out of bed in her nightie and shows us far more of her flesh than I, for one, ever wanted to see. Thankfully Greg doesn't get up at this point but he does inform us that he's naked under the covers *SHUDDER*. Sally tosses him a dressing gown and proceeds to shuffle the gurrls into the kitchen for their first feed of the day while the Gruesome One himself lies in bed looking royally peeved.

So from one mismatched couple to another, it's over to Des' place where he approaches Natalie at the breakfast table and gives her a loud smacker of a kiss on the cheek, asking her to tell him again that she'll accept his proposal. She says they have "things to talk about" and by this she means Children. She explains how she already has one and how Des, of course, is notorious in his desperation for one. She also makes it abundantly clear that there's no way in Hell she's going to have another one so if that's what's on his mind, he should nip it in the bud right now... Err... Figuratively speaking, that is. He reassures her that he's not interested in kids (eh? This is Des!) and that he's in love with *her* and not "non-existant babies". They kiss and she says she's off out to her house to check the post. Des is confused and suggests it could wait awhile, especially since there's no guarantee the postman will have even brought anything! Natalie, however, is smarter than this and insists that he always brings her something... "Every day?" asks Des, perplexedly... "Every October 12th, yes" she chirps, as she heads for the door, "and so far, this has been a really great birthday!" The word "DOH!" could sum up the look on Des' face quite adequately. :)

Now it's back over to The Valley Of The Bland, where the Gruesome One sits alone with the two gurrls who have now finished their tremendously exciting brekkie. He asks, stiltedly what they're going to do at school today and what their favourite lessons are, but gets very little response from the two wee tykes who look terrified of him, quite frankly. When he asks Rursie who her best friend is, she replies "Mum is!" and then, speak of the Devil (or at the very least, the Devil's Whore ;)), Sally appears to send them off and get their coats on. Greg tries to persuade her to let the gurrls stay with Kevin tonight or at least stay with a childminder so that the two of them can sort out some "business things" (funny business, more like!) but the more he pleads, the less impressed she is with the idea. As a sidenote, *why* has Greg started dressing like Kermit The Frog? I think he looked a lot less daft when he was in brown all the time, and that's saying something!

Alma enters the cafe, as if walking on eggshells, and is greeted by a surprised Gail, who engages her in conversation. Alma isn't in the best of moods and Gail muses on the "terrible death" of RoboAnne Malone. "And such a pointless death too!" (AMEN! Such a pointless !$&@ing *storyline* altogether if you ask me!) sighs Alma, "She was so young". Spider enters, looking shaken and stirred in that order, as Alma sits down. He apparently hasn't slept a wink and can't get RoboAnne's corpse out of his mind. Alma, however, is more concerned with her job interview that afternoon with Aiden O'Donnell, the new Regional Manager for Freshco but, despite her nerves, wants to get it over with as soon as possible... And so endeth the scene. Hmm... I'm unimpressed with the whole story, personally. It just doesn't fit in with the general 'feel' of Corrie, for me. Death by freezing just isn't really the sort of thing that is generally played for laughs on the show and although the storyline has provided a few decent giggles and I can't say that, myself, I could care a toss one way or another if Malone died, it just well... it just... err... (I'm looking for a better phrase here and failing)... it just isn't Corrie, is it? Anyway, enough whinging, the story's basically over now...

Des bursts into the back room of the Rovers (where Smiley Spice (aka Lorraine), Alec and Natalie are sitting) carrying a modest Birthday Bouquet of flowers for his fiancee. She accepts the bouquet with pleasure and Des wonders aloud if she's told the others' their news yet. Of course, she hasn't yet ("I didn't know you could be so coy!" he exclaims) so he takes the opportunity to make it common knowledge. "You're marrying him??" splutters Alec, "No wonder you kept it to yourself!" (lol!). Smiley Spice is a bit more sympathetic, saying that if Des has asked her she "wouldn't have been able to keep her mouth shut" which prompts Des to joke that it was a tough choice between her and her Aunt. There's some brief and fairly bland banter exchanged between the four of them and the scene ends with a kiss shared between the newly engaged couple.

Oh and then it's over, so it is, to my dear friend whom I never tire of (cough), Jim MacDonald. He's at home, strapped into some physiotherapy contraption in his living room, lifting weights and telling Action Man Michael that he wants more physiotherapy sessions and more time in the gym. Apparently he's "raring to go" (I sincerely hope he's not referring to Liz at this stage!) and convinced that if he gets more exercise he'll be out of the wheelchair "as quick as a flash". Michael tries to put the kibosh on his enthusiasm and warns him to "pace himself" so as he doesn't burn out. Jim explains he *is* pacing himself but that he "moves fast" before going on to recount how when Liz went upstairs to bed last night he was busy lifting weights downstairs still. Michael (unprofessional, I must say!) is far more concerned about why Liz is sleeping upstairs than he is about Jim who, not knowing any better, says it was just because she needed sleep in a proper bed without him around since she was so tired. Michael slips into deep thought (well, as deep as he gets, anyway) for a few seconds but his Perky Patient snaps him out of it and reminds him to get on the 'phone to the Physiotherapists quick-smart-like to arrange for more sessions...

Ahh, at last some more likeable characters emerge in the Kabin where Alec is buying an engagement card for Natalie & Des. Leanne and Rita are highly amused that Des didn't even know his future wife's birthday ("Does he know her name and address?" quips Lee) but Alec insists that such things are "mere details" when you're in love but, of course, Leanne thinks Des and Natalie are a bit "past it, for all that" anyway... Rita asks if Alec is going to buy a birthday card too but he states, indignantly, that the engagement card is "all the Rovers can afford", adding, in hilarious Gilroy style, "Betty *is* a pensioner, you know!". An unshaven Kevin Webster (maybe he's growing his moustache back to please Glenda's Mam? ;)) is maliciously lingering in the background and Leanne asks, cheerily and naively, if he likes the card. He wonders who it's for and appears somewhat shocked when he is informed with typical Battersby subtlety ("Oh, didn't you *know*?") that his ex-lover is to be married to one of the Street's most notorious playboys.

Over at Underworld, Gruesome Greg, still in Kermit The Frog costume, is hunched over a computer, looking tense (possibly as he peruses alt.fashion.terrible-disasters). Sally busts him and he jumps a bit. He thought the factory was empty for lunch but apparently Sal has stayed behind to escort him to the Rovers. He grunts that he's busy doing something "private" but, after a bit of prompting and some double checking that they're alone, eventually lets her in on his little game. "It's this thing on the internet, right", he begins, "called the CSVU... and there's these tiny pictures of us and all this man calling us names..." ;) *bzzt* No, I'm only kidding. It transpires that, in actual fact, he's transferring the entire Underworld Database of contacts, suppliers, customers and workforces onto a single floppy disc (big database eh? ;)) to use for he and Sally's gain. His plot, which he dubs as being "Industrial Espionage", is to steal Baldwin's business away from right under his nose. Sally pretends to be dead-against the idea but the dollar signs are visible in her eyes, as Greg wraps up the proceedings, grabs the disc and takes her to lunch.

END OF PART ONE
The ads are generally as lacklustre as ever, I'm sorry to report. I've never seen *anyone* get even a tenth as excited about frozen peas, of all things, as the woman in the new Birdseye Frozen Peas advert. It's really quite disturbing. The best one this week is probably the one for the Goldfish Guide (I still have no idea quite what this is, BTW) in which a guy who's been attacked by perfume sprays in a department store is accused of being a "Casanova" and a "Don Juan" amongst other things by his frantic and tearful wife. Yes, it's as dumb as it sounds (possibly even dumber) but at least it's a break from cars and cosmetics.

PART TWO
I'm reminded at this point of a rather fine US Punk Rock record (a pint if you know which one!) which began it's latter half with 4 men with loud New York accents yelling in unison "Here's the second verse! It's worse than the first!"... Quite apt for this episode, really...

Friz sits alone in the pub as Michael approaches her, looking desperate. She warns him to be careful as Jim is nearby in the toilets and continues to moan that she was trying to avoid Jim but he tracked her down and followed her to the Rovers. Michael proceeds to rant on, breathlessly, about how even though he knows what they 'did' (see John Laird's Sunday Update) was wrong he is sure she feels the same way he does and she can't "just ignore it". She avoids the point and tells him to be quiet as, sure enough, here comes Jolly Jim ("What about ye, Michael!"). Michael regains his composure and informs his patient that the Physiotherapist has agreed to let him have more sessions. Jim maintains that Michael can "perform miracles" and offers to buy him a drink, but it's declined, as the uneasy-looking 'Miracle Worker' has to leave in a hurry...

A rather displeased-looking Kevin crosses the road from the garage to the, presently empty, Webster Household and is accosted by his buddy, Martin. The Perky Platt wants to take the Manic Mechanic for a drink in the Rovers' but Kev's having none of it and when questioned, he admits he has no desire to talk to Natalie, having heard (second hand, no less!) the news of her engagement. Martin thinks Kev is seriously overreacting, tells him not to worry about it and suggests he just "stick to the important things", which in this case means going in and saying simply "Two pints, Barmaid" and thinking nothing more of the whole affair. When Kev reluctantly agrees to meet up later on, his good pal reminds him that at least this wedding means she'll be out of his life forever before attesting that the Woeful Webster should be "glad". Unfortunately, the expression on Kev's face at this point is pretty much the anti-thesis of gladness...

Fookin' Hell! It's Mark LaMarr! Actually, on closer inspection it isn't the irritatingly smug gameshow host, it is in fact the curiously non- Irish Aiden O'Donnell, Freshco's replacement Regional Manager who is as smarmy and sickly as they come... It's also time for Alma's interview with him in the office once belonging to RoboAnne Malone. To be frank, this whole scene had me falling asleep at the wheel it was so badly written so I'll sum it some equally poorly written sentences. In a nutshell, he asks Alma to be the new Manager, in place of Curly but she believes Curly will be back and wouldn't want to usurp his position. Eventually it becomes obvious that he's only offering her the job in return for her keeping quiet and not talking to the press about the tale of Nutty Malone, so Alma's pride gets the better of her and she walks out claiming she has her "loyalties in the right order" and that Freshco's integrity isn't high on the list. *yawn* Why are they putting such a fine character (and actress!) like Alma into such a dreadfully contrived storyline?

Sally enters the Rovers with Gruesome Greg, who seems to think he's at a fancy dress party, sporting the most garish green shirt and even greener tie combo I've ever seen him clad in. Kevin, at the bar, nursing his pint, grunts "What're you doing here?" to them almost instantly but Sal pleads with him to just leave them alone. As this is Kevin, her request is typically ignored and he asks where the kids are. When she replies that they're with a childminder he plows into her, sarcastically yelling "I thought you couldn't live without 'em? You needed them? You couldn't eat, you couldn't sleep? Then as soon as *HE* rolls back, you dump them!", something which obviously enrages Sal no end. Greg forcefully tells Kevin to go home, to which the mechanic responds loudly "NO! It's *her* who does just what you tell her, not me!", as a nearby Martin pushes his pal to the other side of the bar, warning him to calm down. Sally is shaken and leaves, followed quickly by Greg as an irate Alec Gilroy walks over and asks Kevin if his "domestic dispute" is over, only to be greeted by sarcasm. "Just keep serving, Alec" he grunts, with that look in his eye that screams 'I'm gonna get *plastered* tonight!', "I'll shut up from now on". This is a lie since, as soon as Alec departs, Kev turns his attentions to Natalie, telling her in no uncertain terms that Des has "had one woman after another" and "doesn't even remember half of them"! Nat tries to defend her honour and points out, indignantly, that the least he could do is congratulate her but Kev doesn't think this is in order because, in his opinion, she's making the "biggest mistake of her life"...

Over at the MacDonald household, Friz is clearing up the plates after dinner as Jim tells her he's managed to squeeze an extra physiotherapy session into his schedule. She thinks he's going too fast but (again!!!) he attests he's all fired up for a speedy recovery before harping on about how he has Michael to thank more than anyone for his progress. "He put me back on the road to recovery and pushed me half way down it", he states, oblivious to the fact that his supposed 'Saviour' is sleeping with his partner! Liz gets uneasy and frustrated, telling Jim that Michael is nothing special, is just doing his job, etc, before claiming it's only Jim who is to be accredited to his own progress. Jim gets all soft and tells her gently that she's had a big part in it too. For having faith in him... For believing in him... He then asks if she'll sleep downstairs with him, tonight. She looks dreadfully uneasy which isn't surprising since he's just poured out great love and respect for the two people who are screwing him over the most, behind his back!

Kev, still propping the bar up, looks suitably pickled. Natalie reluctantly pours him a pint and warns him that this is definately going to be his last one for the night as the camera cuts ever so briefly to Spider and Alma, sitting on the other end of the pub. Spider congratulates Alma, at length, for "refusing to be bought" by the Corporate Beasties (TM) but something on her face suggests she's not so proud of her latest career decision as he is... Whoop whoop, then it's back to Kevin who is slurring on about how "good" he and Natalie were, together. She pleads with him to just go home but this drives him to desperation. "I still want you", he whines, continuing with "Don't marry Des! Don't go anywhere near him!" before ending his drunken ramblings on a nicely placed albeit utterly absurd bombshell: "Marry *ME*!"

Ironic cut now to Sally at home with Greg: "I hate it when he makes a show of himself in public" she says, blissfully unaware of the *huge* duck's arse he's just made out of himself *after* she left! Greg tells her to just ignore her Horrendous Husband and this prompts her to change the subject over to the aforementioned pirated databse. She thinks it's wrong to steal from Baldwin since he "employs" them and "trusts" them, but Greg is adamant that if the shoe were on the other foot, Baldwin would do the same... "We don't have to run our business the way he runs his", maintains Sally but Blandford insists that she'll get used to this sort of behaviour (which, apparently is his idea of "business") once she... wait for it... "Toughens up"! The look on Sally's face actually expresses something almost.. nearly.. yes, nearly there.. akin to doubt and even slight distaste for her boyfriend's plans. Maybe she's finally making progress?

Speaking of Baldwin, he is sitting in the Rovers, at a table, characteristically slagging off his wife, telling Alma that she is ridiculously underqualified for the managerial job, that she's no experience, "no idea" (!) and that he's totally amazed they offered her the position at all. She defends her abilities but Mike launches into a tirade explaining that she would have, logically, taken the job since surely Curly would rather see her in the position (when he comes back) than some "complete stranger". Thus, he reckons the only reason she didn't take it is because she knows she's thoroughly incapable. Of course, all this does is fuel her fires and I have a sneaky suspicion that she may well be changing her mind slightly in the future...

Cutting back to the bar, Kevin is getting increasingly wound up as Natalie tells him there's nothing between them any more. Alec wanders over to see if there's a "problem", but Kevin violently snaps at him to mind his own business. Thus, Alec enlists the help of Mike Baldwin to chuck Kev out for the night, (an opportunity for Baldwin to sneer at Alma with a quick "See? This is what happens to losers!"). He tosses the screaming mechanic out of the door before proceeding to taunt the poor drunkard further once they're out on the street, accusing Kev of being a "fool". "I'm not the only fool here, though am I?" laughs Kev, as the only decent moment in the whole show looms forth on the horizon. "I'll tell you something you'd like to know" he snorts, ominously, but Mike just continues to take the piss right until the bombshell is dropped: "Greg and Sally", growls the World-Weary Webster, "They've set up business together... They're taking what's your's right from under your nose... Stealing your orders... Right in your face and you can't even see it can you? They're both laughing at you! So who's the fool now, Mike?".

As Kevin stumbles down the street, laughing his head off at this revelation, a Bewildered Baldwin slinks back into the Rovers and the credits roll...

So there you have it. Aside from that final little bit of comeuppance for a certain cocky swine, a really dire episode, by my mileage, hence the dodgy update and total lack of enthusiasm on my part. The Jim/Liz/Michael love triangle is rapidly becoming infinitely more tedious that the never- ending Kevin/Sally/Greg one and the RoboAnne Malone plot gets my vote for by far the worst one this year and the dragging out of it is a surefire cure for insomnia. Let's hope all of this rot gets wrapped up asap and we can resume to the normal service of pure televisual magic that we're used to... Til next time, take care! :)

This Monday Update was sponsored by Autechre (what I was listening to) and Stella Artois (what I was drinking)...

The Rattler


Wednesday 14 October

Welcome to the Ruthie 'n' Rosie Show. Yes, those intrepid adventurers, following their daring voyage to the very heart of the Blackpool Ghost Train, are now bringing your their tour of Weatherfield, alternating Wednesdays.

Tradition seems to indicate that I should start with some sort of personal preamble. Well, I'd really like to draw a veil over what has been Not One Of My Better Weeks but one bright star that shines through is the postcard now sitting on my desk. It shows a lovely picture of Durham Cathedral shrouded in trees, and comes from my daughter Karen Spry, who is now settled in to St Aidans College, studying history (and not modern languages at all :/), and so far loving every minute. One to treasure, I think.

My scratch video got used up for something else. So I had to go through my precious collection of 40s film noir and weepy musicals to find a tape to sacrifice on the altar of Corrie updates. I settled on "To Have and Have Not" - you know the one; Humphrey Bogart, in Vichy French territory in WW2 and with the means to aid the escape of the resistance but too cynical to do much about it, falls for a femme fatale and sacrifices himself to the cause. What? You thought that was "Casablanca"? No, this was the big budget version of the same basic story with a top director (Howard Hawks), and real stars, and one unforgettable moment (Lauren Bacall: "You know how to whistle don't you Steve? You just put your lips together and blow"), but despite all that, nothing like as good. There's a moral in there somewhere, about how big budgets, stars and high tech don't necessarily make a better product. So it is with CS; I do feel that some of the grittiness of old black and white Corrie's from the 1960s has been lost.

Talking of films, HTV scheduled the 1994 film of "Maverick" to follow Corrie last night. That's the recreation of the old TV western with Mel Gibson in the role immortalised by James Garner, with the wonderful and rather underrated Garner in a guest role. And, said the HTV continuity announcer after the trailer for it, it's "more a case of High Noon in Weatherfield..."

From a shadowy doorway on a dusty street, a sinister figure emerges. A lone gunslinger - gaunt, unshaven, mean - looks out.

Oh sorry, it's not Lee Van Cleef after all. It's our Kevin. Hi Kev! No answer. Looks like he's had a bad night.

The camera pans to a car that most definitely does not belong on the rugged frontier. (Cars are a comparative rarity on Coronation Street, there seems to be no passing traffic and no parking problems, which is surprising for a street which has a higher level of affluence and economic activ